Conrad Rice

Hi Megan! I'll be your reviewer for today! :) My first thing I noticed has to be these paragraphs throughout. They're incredibly big. And they're mostly filled with description and ...

Hi Jabbs! Here is the story I told you about. Hope you enjoy! :)

The Annabel glared at the fleet before it. The ships of the Anzari Empire were arrayed at the edge of the asteroid field, weapons primed, shields charged, exteriors glinting in ...

Hi Rubin! I'm Conrad Rice, one of the Instructors here on YWS, and I'm here to give you a critique. Since I’m going to privet , all uniform school cloths ...

I know you people out there need your works critiqued. Well, here I am to give that to you! :) I can promise you an overall and polite critique on ...

Hi Gryphon! I have to say that I loved this story. I thought that Virginia was very well characterized and a very sympathetic MC. The relationship between her and Fox, ...

Well, this was a somewhat interesting story. I saw some spelling and grammar mistakes sprinkled throughout the work. It's nothing too severe, a quick runthrough with spellcheck ought to clear ...

Amarian stood with High Lord Gildabareth in the pass. The twin peaks of Zaknul and Haknul towered over them. The servant boy trembled, but the warrior simply starred ahead with ...

I write anywhere I can prop my notebook on my lap. :)

Hey guys, I've reviewed stories by the both of you before, and thought I would drop in to give my two cents. I thought I could see places where I ...

Hi! I'm here to give you a quick review. :) First off, I question the use of a different language as the title when it isn't relevant to the poem. ...

The hill was very high. Johnny pushed down on the pedals as hard as he could, striving to get to the top. The anniversary was today. He had made a ...

There was fire in the heavens. The aurora blazed overhead, bathing the frozen Baja peninsula in vibrant colour. It was somewhat beautiful. But for Rob Reynolds and Dana Sentrosi, it ...

Hi Nikkiiee! I'm Conrad Rice, one of the Instructors here on YWS. We're the blokes with the purple names. If you have a problem with your writing, or have become ...

"I'm a leaf on the wind. Watch how I soar." Sometimes, in order to appreciate the light, you have to know the darkness. Teamwork. Because none of us is as ...